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Post by MasterMind on Nov 11, 2003 16:53:50 GMT -5
The Veterans Day Battle of [glow=Teal,2,300]SirKibbles Vs. cRiTiCaLzEr0[/glow] DJ!! DJ!!! SPIN THAT BEAT!!!!
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Post by cRiTiCaLzEr0 on Nov 11, 2003 20:26:21 GMT -5
Hey Sir Kibbles Your rhymes to me aren’t nothing but riddles maybe you should change you name to SirScribbles
Your challenge that I accepted I starting to reconsider Seeing that my flow is a one-hitter-quitter
Man, quit talking like you know how to use ebonics I’ll knock you out as fast as a sonic and make you start from square one with hooked on phonics
I’ll knock you straight up in the air with my shin-shoryuken Then finish my air-combo with a sinku-hadouken
With the past battles I’ve seen I can see why you said you need improvement Since I can get through you with little movement
You’ll never match my witty repartee Wait a second, you would, if you weren’t always running away
What’s that, is that another weak flow your makin’? Man you rhyming should be forsaken Seeing how this round is mine for the takin'
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Post by SirKibbles on Nov 11, 2003 20:45:03 GMT -5
Your "skill level" is critically reaching zero Your no hero, face the fact Beef in these streets but the beats make me act right I don't sleep on these "quick-to-pull-the-gat" types Cuz right when you blink, they'll squeeze and hold the mac tight One rapper tested me and though I was a punk I ain't seen his body since I threw it out of my trunk Tie you up and beat you worse than LL Cool J's mommy I've killed so many M.C's, never remembering the number People writin me letters sayin “I know what you did last summer” I curse all those who try to go against me But since I can't "curse", I'll just keep spitting verse after verse I'mma be sending you out of this battle in a hearse From what I heard you think your a mc? That you put rap back in crap, right? I'm tired of rapping mc's who rap worst then benzino Where closing now to the end of this battle Like a story, chapter after chapter Well here's the closing chapter... End Of Story ----------------------------------------------------------------------- MC[glow=green,2,300]SirKibbles[/glow]
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Post by MasterMind on Nov 11, 2003 20:46:18 GMT -5
Here's how to vote:- Give us your name
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Vote now! Voting ends on the 14 th of November. If you do not follow the rules, your vote will be purged. (The competitors cannot vote) Please, no spam.
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Post by VallanKnight on Nov 11, 2003 22:01:57 GMT -5
Voter: Josh
Pros (+) and Cons (-):
Zero: +a lot of good attacks +Street Fighter analogy worked perfectly -Rythym comes apart a little near the end -"Wait a second, you would" cheapens your flow with a recoil.
Kibbles: +"curse" section worked well. let's see more stuff comparable to that. -Beat was up and down all over. -ending crashed and burned -started weird. "critically reaching zero" may be a clever play on his name, but it doesn't work in this flow.
Final Score: Critical Zero, for a vastly superior flow. C'mon, Kibbles! I've seen that you have some good stuff, use it!
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dudette
Soldier
you're a loser.
Posts: 80
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Post by dudette on Nov 11, 2003 22:46:11 GMT -5
voter: stevie
brian: -really good attacks -awkward wording sometimes -lost the rhythm at times, but otherwise strong -great ending
kibbles: -very weak rhythm -attacks were pretty irrelevant -ending weak... ('cause you rhymed chapter with chapter)
vote: criticalzero
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G-Force 4
Pimp Protégé
AHHH! My Toe!
Posts: 196
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Post by G-Force 4 on Nov 11, 2003 23:18:31 GMT -5
G here
First off
Brian + nice steady stream of attacks, just like a real SF combo + droped some killer lines (hocked on phonics) -witty repartay line killed beat
Kibbles +Strong opening -Beat is off
Vote: Critical Zero
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Post by SourMonkey on Nov 12, 2003 0:08:25 GMT -5
-gary
-i vote for brian
reason-his flow sounded better and kibbles ending was weak(chapter and chapter)
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Post by SirKrakalot on Nov 12, 2003 14:39:25 GMT -5
Name:Shane Vote: Zero Reason: I don't know what happened Kibbles but there was little to no beat in your flow at all Brain you too seemed to lose the beat as well t points. Nice attacks on both parts but becuase of the overall flow I had to go with Zero.
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Post by cRiTiCaLzEr0 on Nov 12, 2003 19:24:37 GMT -5
Yeah, my rhyme become pretty weak . There'll be improvement. Don't worry .
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