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Post by ucsroswell on Nov 12, 2003 20:11:06 GMT -5
eric
brian
+beat was nice, until end juss threw off a lil bit
+had some REALLY good lines, synonyms tho, u need synonyms i saw too many boring or words repeated
-not much bad, just keep beat on track
kibbles
+beginning was nice
-just lost it from there, no beat to follow, rhythm and just overall ease of reading was just not there
vote goes to brian paz. good stuff both of ya tho
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Post by sLiCkViC on Nov 13, 2003 1:05:56 GMT -5
sry my vote goes for zero. he had better beats and he actually RHYMED THE WHOLE time. sirkibbles lost it a couple of times.god job both of yall
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Post by NorthKorean on Nov 13, 2003 3:15:51 GMT -5
Name: Gun-Ik
Comments:
-Both of you guys need smore lines. brian had a good sense of beat but kibbles is off a bit...easily fixable but wasnt fixed at all.
-both of you need some more wit inside it. brain has it going on just try not to go so much into defence saying HOW yer gonna kill him...we want to see the beat down..not how yer gonna.
-basically, im just gonna vote for the better overall sounding flow which is..
vote: cRiTiCaLzEr0
reason: overall better flow. took some offense but mostly won through his maintaining of beat. his style resembles a lesser-G..haha. kibbles..work on beat and yer wit. some of it was good like putting the rap back in crap...you need more of that kind of level of wit. same with you brian.
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Post by MasterMind on Nov 19, 2003 22:48:36 GMT -5
Voting has now ended. The Winner:[glow=Teal,2,300]cRiTiCaLzEr0[/glow] Congratulations cRiTiCaLzEr0, you have won the battle! SirKibbles, you are the loser. Humiliation!Total:cRiTiCaLzEr0: 8 votes SirKibbles: 0 votes Knock Out[/i][/u][/color] |
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