Post by YaDhAn on Jul 14, 2004 21:53:35 GMT -5
PLEASE critique; it's meant for my own skill development and NOT for the purpose of battling. Thanks to all that read this over! 
Also thanks to those who are FINALLY posting 
Here’s the beat:
www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=405568&q=Lo
Start around 0:26
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I’m ready to flow yet your teeth are aching
My grandma’s here cuz it’s you she’s baking
You look nervous ‘cuz yo’s head’s been shaking
I hope you’re ready for this so don’t go flaking
My grandma’s done baking so here’s the bad news
You’re fried, grilled, shish kabob’ed or stewed
The only flows you know are the ones with ooze,
My flows will fly ‘cuz I’m just in the mood
I got this ready to bring my force to show
You got to keep up with me on your bandaged toes
Oh I almost forgot that yo toe took a blow
This flow is a pimp, but yo’s is a hoe
You answered the challenge not knowing the stakes
Spewing the crap about you is a piece of cake
I got a new name for you: Emotional Lake
No matter what it is, you always come out fake
I see you cranked the music – oh gee it’s Japanese
Funny loons and evil goons but shut the music PLEASE
The G in your name oddly ain’t for Original G’s,
But it does rhyme with Anime bopper wannabes
You come in listening to some techno contraption
You say you dance but it’s some chemical reaction
Then you try to break but you fall without traction
You just krazy, fool – no brains, all action
You’re in your own world up there in the sky
You barge into groups with a big loud “HI”
They look at you like you some crazy fry
The second you greet them they all went “bye!”
You can’t flow for crap but you (try to) pimp,
Then you do the walk but you look like you limp
If you gonna hit on people then find the right girls
Not an 80 yr old woman who farts through her nose
The battle’s done; the G-Force zero
Now little kids are yelling, “YaHdAn is my hero!”
I’m getting sued by the Federal Bureau
But winning this battle gave me dinero ;D
“Thanks for judging” marks the end of this round
Regardless of our fight, we leave without sound
G may be a sly cat but I’m the phat hound
Sorry G-force but you’ve NOW. BEEN. CLOWNED.
Also thanks to those who are FINALLY posting 
Here’s the beat:
www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=405568&q=Lo
Start around 0:26
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I’m ready to flow yet your teeth are aching
My grandma’s here cuz it’s you she’s baking
You look nervous ‘cuz yo’s head’s been shaking
I hope you’re ready for this so don’t go flaking
My grandma’s done baking so here’s the bad news
You’re fried, grilled, shish kabob’ed or stewed
The only flows you know are the ones with ooze,
My flows will fly ‘cuz I’m just in the mood
I got this ready to bring my force to show
You got to keep up with me on your bandaged toes
Oh I almost forgot that yo toe took a blow
This flow is a pimp, but yo’s is a hoe
You answered the challenge not knowing the stakes
Spewing the crap about you is a piece of cake
I got a new name for you: Emotional Lake
No matter what it is, you always come out fake
I see you cranked the music – oh gee it’s Japanese
Funny loons and evil goons but shut the music PLEASE
The G in your name oddly ain’t for Original G’s,
But it does rhyme with Anime bopper wannabes
You come in listening to some techno contraption
You say you dance but it’s some chemical reaction
Then you try to break but you fall without traction
You just krazy, fool – no brains, all action
You’re in your own world up there in the sky
You barge into groups with a big loud “HI”
They look at you like you some crazy fry
The second you greet them they all went “bye!”
You can’t flow for crap but you (try to) pimp,
Then you do the walk but you look like you limp
If you gonna hit on people then find the right girls
Not an 80 yr old woman who farts through her nose
The battle’s done; the G-Force zero
Now little kids are yelling, “YaHdAn is my hero!”
I’m getting sued by the Federal Bureau
But winning this battle gave me dinero ;D
“Thanks for judging” marks the end of this round
Regardless of our fight, we leave without sound
G may be a sly cat but I’m the phat hound
Sorry G-force but you’ve NOW. BEEN. CLOWNED.
