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Post by Zeitgeist on Oct 20, 2003 12:47:27 GMT -5
CHR: I want the Good Life, the Good life I want the Good Life, the Good life If I can't get the best, why should I live leave more than a memory for my wife and kids.
I want the Good Life, the Good life I want the Good Life, the Good life If I miss in the goal, I live in vain Welcome hell's gates to assuage the pain.
Verse 1 I stack bricks and shit to make my house in to a home So my heart will be a lil warm, to floss a lil chrome Is that too much ask, too much to need Well If thats law, I plead guilty cause I got big dreams of things that gleam hustling hard but big money don't come in at nineteen But I still dream of bigger and better things Workin day and night harder than ten koreans Critical mass the manifest of this human being but most of my peers don't be seeing what I'm seeing they claim im flawed and all, say I can't reach tha stars but they don't understand my past, my emotional scars But I set that aside, let day turn to night but not even pitch darkness can conceal my sight Christ Help the singlar dollar, turn in to pural me, my lady tourin the world living that good life
CHR: I want the Good Life, the Good life I want the Good Life, the Good life If I can't get the best, why should I live leave more than a memory for my wife and kids.
I want the Good Life, the Good life I want the Good Life, the Good life If I miss in the goal, I live in vain Welcome hell's gates to assuage the pain.
My values differ from those of my classmates They walk down the road of life, I take the interstate Windows up, music blaring, 90 miles and hour I'm running late no time for me to smell flowers Skipping big parties, forgoing birthdays but you do what you gotta do to get your ass paid cause I got big dreams of rings and things work alotta to get a lotta from yatchs to wings but its hard for this teen to find some magic beans jack and the beanstalk but this story seems impossible, yet its--- plausible. Goals seems miles away but I run by naticals Navigating the open ocean through the seas to see the fruits of my labor, my eventual victory the words of these haters don't mean shit to me you don't open no doors if you gotta the wrong key saying
CHR: I want the Good Life, the Good life I want the Good Life, the Good life If I can't get the best, why should I live leave more than a memory for my wife and kids.
I want the Good Life, the Good life I want the Good Life, the Good life If I miss in the goal, I live in vain Welcome hell's gates to assuage the pain.
Verse Three
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Post by NorthKorean on Oct 20, 2003 19:59:24 GMT -5
id just like to commend you for that. that is the greatest flow ive heard from anyone of us...who are you? you go to logan?
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Post by MasterMind on Oct 20, 2003 20:09:06 GMT -5
Nii!!!!!! Oh man, glad you could make it!! I hope you'll be dropping by more often. Perhaps we can have like a... 5on1 rap battle against you. Dude, that rap was awesome. Maybe you can teach that "Satan" guy a lesson. What do you think about this site? I would really appreciate your feedback.
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Post by JohnE on Oct 20, 2003 20:45:09 GMT -5
i think im about to cry man, that was awesome. =] wsup nii it's tina's brotha, johnny.
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Post by MasterMind on Oct 20, 2003 21:27:52 GMT -5
Gun-Ik, if this forum could only be used for rhyming then you'd be a hypocrite. You see what I mean when I say people just want to comment instead of flow all the time.
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Post by soysaucey on Oct 20, 2003 22:50:58 GMT -5
I can't stop the frustration I can't stop the pain I'm drowning in confusion It's driving me insane. Feelin insecure I wanna get away Feeling so unsure I wanna take back yesterday. The hate in me Is taking over me Corrupting me Driving me Controlling me. I can't see What's ahead of me. The sorrow, the pain is blinding me My screams, my cries. Your broken promises and lies. You'll never be the same person in my eyes. I can feel myself falling apart My eyes, my ears, My soul, my heart. I feel trapped Chained the the ground. Locked in a cage To which I am bound. Walls surround me I try to break free. Fear suppresses me As I fall on my knees. Let me go So I can move on. I don't know anymore, What's goin on? Stop making promises that you cant keep. Stop this now before we fall too deep. Now, it's too late, We already fell... Falling down into the pits of hell. Your vanity Is driving me To insanity. I can't breathe when I think of what you've done to me. Leave me alone So I can be free. Away from the pain that you're causing me. Just a random flow. =] No need to respond.
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Post by Zeitgeist on Oct 20, 2003 23:50:13 GMT -5
I probably should have introduced myself in the Roll Call Section. But yes, this is Nii, c/o 02. I'm a 2nd year at berkeley now and Victor Wang pulled me into the BBS.
Thanks for the feedback/compliments, i wrote those lyrics in 11th grade, i've been searching for someone to spit the third verse on the song for a while, I actually have it recorded. Maybe if I have enough time i'll post it to my site so ya'll can take a listen.
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Post by OVictorWangO on Oct 21, 2003 0:24:29 GMT -5
You're too young to think about the wife and kids, Nii. =P
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Post by xXSiNiStEr_MiXeRXx on Oct 21, 2003 0:53:54 GMT -5
nice flow yvonne and wow its Nii... hey you might not know me... but i've seen ya flow.... and with lyrics like that you should become a pro
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Post by soysaucey on Oct 21, 2003 21:48:18 GMT -5
thanks =]
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