Hypnotic Vs. SirKrakalot

[MasterMind]

It is time!!

[glow=yellow,2,300]Hypnotic Vs. SirKrakalot[/glow]

DJ!! DJ!!! SPIN THAT BEAT!!!!!

[SirKrakalot]

Shoulda known it was a mistake to test me
Shoulda known I was the best emcee
Where as you still just a wannabe
Spewing rhymes filled with hypocrisy

So what if you’re quicker thicker and blacker
Guess what I'm still the better rapper
You wanna call me kracker that’s sir to you
I’m about to flow so bid your pride adieu

My list of kills marked you as number two
So just sit back and pick up another brew
Cause drinking alcohols all you can really do
I forgot about bad acting you can do that to

Who you kidding with a name like Hypnotic
Halfass rhymes sound like a drunk ass hick
Rhymes so bad there making people sick
But my rhymes have never been as slick
So check it man you just got beat by a Mick

Your flows so bad you make ears bleed
A quick death is all you really need
To put you out of everybody’s misery
So with sharp words I’ll slit your wrists
I’m sure you won’t even be missed

Good riddance to such bad rhyming
Broke you like I did your mom’s hymen
Face it Hyp you just don’t measure up
Nothing but a bad rapping little chump
Maybe it’s because you’re always drunk
My rhymes Bling but yours just Clunk

Too late you had your chance to runaway
So now there’s nothing much to say
Except maybe that I got that last word
Make sure it’s the last you ever heard
Biacth

Peace Eazyz From Da Kraker



...NOTE: a Mick is a term for Irish people

[Hypnotic]

Ding ding the round has begun.
Who's that comin at ya? Hypnotics the one.
You can't hurt me, I'm havin too much fun
I'll beat ya worse than yo dad does his son.
In just four moves SirKrak is done.

Two jabs to your midsection
Who you think you been testin?
Hypnotics on the mic so you betta start stressin
My words kill like Bond's Golden PP7
I hope you're on you way up to Heaven
'Casue when this is over, it's this earth you'll be leavin.

It's Hypnotic and I'm reppin Chech 1 2
But I don't need them to take out someone like you.
Punk, get a clue.
My rhymes are so sick they give you the flu.
When I'm done and you get on the mic, people start to boo.

A hook to your temple
I'm poppin your pride like a pimple
Takin out SirKrak is way too simple.
When I attack, I'll slice you like Zorro
And end your rap carreer faster than Lindsey did our duo

One more shot to your tummy.
Rappin against Hyp. you would have to be a dummy
Please, SirKrak, don't do this to me.
Step up, I'll knock out your teeth and I would hate to call you gummy.

Acceptin my challenge, man, you shouldn't have done it.
You could have been at home stuffin your stomach.
Hypnotic in the house I'm the best on the planet,
SirKrakalot swings from my nuts like a hammock.

Left hook to your right cheeck
Your chances against me are lookin way too bleek.
I'll knock you down, you'll see me walkin away in my shoes from Shiek.
You'll be at the doctor, black and blue for a week
I'll be in the window laughin, watchin as I sneak a peak.

My skillz have blown your mind.
You'r a three of a kind,
But I'm a Royal Flush
I turn songs into excellence with just one touch.
SirKrakalot you talk too much.
Now shut up!
Somebody put somethin in his mouth.
My zippas stuck

[eloquence]

Name: Daniel Drake


Like Sirkibbles as well i vote for a tie. I think they should battle again but this time actually freestyle it. Just start typing whatever comes to your mind. The battle had strong points to it and I really liked it. Johnathon had a good style of the boxing thing. Shane had a luft gut punch to john with the drunk comment. They are both so good that i wanna see it again becaue i cant make up my mind. I didnt really expect that out of shane cuz he told me he couldnt rap that well. WHAT A LIER!!!
He really shocked me.

MY VOTE: It was a tie. Battle again.

[SirKibbles]

Name - SirKibbles (aka Kareem)
Vote - TIE!!!

I say you two go at it again. It was way to hard to decide on a winner. You both came pretty good in my eye's. Though I wish you both would've ended better.

John *Hypnotic* -

(Pro) He had some nice attacks, kept on the offensive side which I like.
(Pro) I also like the nice lil' boxing theme that he had going in the beginning. Gave a nice battling feeling to his flow.

(Con) Felt that you should've ended it better. You had that nice boxing thing going, and should've continued it.
(Con) Tried a lil' to hard to use to many damn metaphors.

Shane *SirKrakalot* -

(Pro) You had me laughing a lot when I was reading your rhymes. Meaning your attacks were defiantly good. You did a lot better than I expected.
(Pro) You made me learn what the hell Mick meant... hahaha, so yeah...

(Con) Your second paragraph was so damn good I feel that you should've ended it with that one, and like a couple of more lines for a ending punch line. -.-
(Con) If you would've ended it better you would've had this on in the bag, but since you didn't... I have to make my vote a draw.

[MasterMind]

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[VallanKnight]

Voter: Josh

Pros (+) and Cons (-)

SirKrakalot:
+ Starts out nice and fast, no beating around the bush here.
- line four has the first in a series of typos/spelling errors/grammatical errors througout the flow. I'm only considering it one con in general, because it doesn't mess with the flow, but it did bother me
+ the second verse was very strong, hitting on a stereotype and blasting it in the face effectively
- the first line of verse three seemed a little weak. you're calling him your number two? go for exaggeration and uplifting the positives, not something that calls attention to a small track record
+ the alchohol attack was effective, and stayed above the belt (if only barely)
+ fourth verse carries through and expands the alcohol reference, very effective
+ sharp words slitting wrists. excellent wordplay
- his mom's hymen? what a low-brow attack.
+ I liked the "your rhymes clunk" phrase, I don't know why.
+Nice flow, though it stuttered a little from time to time
+ The final verse closed it up nicely, and the "Last Word" I feel worked well. Biatch indeed, but let's see how he responds...

Hypnotic:
+ Excellent first verse, particularly the "having too much fun" phrase, as well as the promise to end it in four moves. however,
- You call out four moves, but you throw five in your metaphor. Your first attack is two in one, and after calling only four, you take five. a bit disappointing, honestly
+ The Goldeneye reference worked well, though it is slightly out of place in a boxing ring.
- "rhymes so sick they give you the flu"? I know it was meant as an attack, but you actually strengthen one of Kraka's attacks with that line. I know it wasn't intended, but the attack doesn't come off well.
+ The fourth verse picks up the strngth of the flow again, several simple, effective rhymes which flow excellently together, nice return
? "hate to call you a gummy"? a little bit of an awkward attack, but I can see it. no con, but not a pro either
- "swings from my nuts like a hammock". ugh. another low-brow attack in this battle, and it doesn't even make sense.
+ excellent closer, came close to low-brow, but stopped short enough to be effective. Good flow overall.

Final Score: SirKrakalot. I felt he had more solid attacks, and no one line could really be used against him. Not knowing the line limit for this battle, and frankly not really caring, I gotta say, the kracka won me over. Good fight.

[Hypnotic]

Yo im gonna vote on dis shiznit 'cause aint nobody payin attention to dis shiznit anywayz.

So Hypnotic was incredible and Sircrak was not.

So my vote goes to Hypnotic.
(My vote counts as 1 million)