WhiteBoy321 Vs. SirKribblez

[WhiteBoy321]

no bar limit
firs to 5
3-0 is ko
4-1 is tech ko
no dr votes
no hate votes
no trash talkin after verses
and of course all votes have to be explained.

ill spit after school today

[WhiteBoy321]

*.:Jus warmin up:.*
yo you talk alot of shit, back it up in ya spit, set ya self up so i can knock to tha cement/
dont come to me drunk or lit, itll be worse for your punishment, so that you can spit better take a mint/

*.:Beggina Shit:.*
i gurentee that you a horrible verbalist/
written shit so you can be a journalist/
your spits are nothing but empty matter/
you like a pancake and steppin up to me will jus make you flatter/

*.:Style Switch:.*
whiteboy, emcee who leave you in tha infirmary, wit everything broken from ya head to ya knee/
battlin me you mus be crazy, go back to elementary, you second grade emcee/
you spit worse then ja rule, ima ill emcee made you look like a fool/
spit it so bad that itll make you drool, good dog now go bury ya bone and why ya at it ya self too/

*.:Just "Rappin"it Up:.*
talk bout bustin people wit a chrome, i dare ya son/
last heater you had was heatin ya car, and that aint no gun/

[SirKibbles]

Look stupid, you have to have J-Unit make the shit official. Don't get all hyped up with your gay ass flow. Just sit back, wait, he'll choose a date, and will battle. Hopefully when he chooses a date, and that date comes, you'll have a way better flow. Damn, when I said we got trash around the board.... I was talkin' about you. haha we got some white trash right here. Still proud to be the 'white boy'.

[MasterMind]

It's gettin' hot in here!

You two have to set up the rules and date, then I'll make it official.

[SirKibbles]

A little flow I created to go against his. Seeing as J-Unit seems a bit busy, I'm just going to take a chance and respond to whiteboy321's diss, even though it's unofficial. Hopefully no one really minds, and we can still vote and everything like that on who's rap was better. Another reason I'm doing this is because I was hoping J-Unit would make it official sometime during the weekend, because that is the only time I have free. So pretty much if I didn't diss him back now, I wasn't going to be able to till probably the weekend after next. So I just decided to do it now, and take the chance of hopefully not getting yelled at for bending the rules a bit. Well, here it is, my short diss back.

I could be drunk as fuck, and still spit a flow 80% better than you.
I'll kill any mc you give me.
Your just another punk to fuck up, and leave in dust as I cuss up a storm.
Weather you like it or not, your gonna be beat by me
A true mc, not like you, a 'whiteboy' wannabe

They call me SirKibbles for a reason 'son'
I serve em' up like kibbles and bits
I might be a 'dog', but your just a pup
So cut the act and stick to the facts
Your not eminem just 'cause your white
You two are different, see: He gets head, you give head... the two hold no relation
So stop your infatuation you have for him
Any way, movin' on

You even call me ja, but your words bounce off me like bullets do 50
Yeah, your a " ill emcee " , that's only because my rhymes are sick like viruses and S.T.D's
These lyrics are gonna stick to you like glue
Finding easy ways to pick at you like bullys do in school
Now who's looking like the fool?
You've been served up worse than 50 with bad grammer
Your worse than a white mc hammer

I'm done for now
But remember to bow down
When you hear the sound of my name
And I better never catch you saying it in vain, or else you'll be slain worse than vampires on buffy

MC [glow=Green,2,300]SirKibbles[/glow]

[MasterMind]

Theres been some confusion in the postings. But it doesn't matter cuz the battle is up! VOTE NOW HOMIES!

Here's how to vote:

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• Put the name of the competitor you voted for

Vote now! Seeing as how this forum has not been exploding with action, voting will end when enough people have voted. There will be no specific deadline. (The competitors cannot vote)

Please, no spam.

[YaDhAn]

Unfortunately, I haven't been able to show much activity again -- due to AP testing n all that other crap.


One thing about this before anyone reads: I did not factor in the technicality about the time discrepency of posting the flows. Just making that clear.

Name: Nade Sritanyaratana

Whiteboy321:
+theme going on
+puns
-I don't know your beat
-I don't know your rhythm
-I don't know your speed
-#@)*)@#@'ing @#)*@)*@#'edd @)*@#)*#@! STOP CURSING!
-I felt it needed a better rhyme scheme...

Sirkibbles:
+unusually good offense
-unusually bad rhyme (sorry man)
-I don't know your beat
-I don't know your rhythm
-I don't know your speed
-#@)*)@#@'ing @#)*@)*@#'edd @)*@#)*#@! STOP CURSING!


That said, I did not see any outstanding reason to vote for anyone -- there are a few small things here and there (line by line abuot the attacks and such), and if I had to add them all up, I vote for SirKibbles for his offense and length of flow. ONE BIG DISCLAIMER ABOUT THIS: SirKibbles. SERIOUSLY -- get more rhyme going in. A flow really isn't a flow until it follows some scheme. Rhapsody IS a form of poetry, although it's uh... a ghettonized form of poetry (in lack of a better word) So, for the upcoming battles, keep in mind: just posting in a ton of offensive lines won't get you far.


So, that said, I'll repeat who I said I voted for: SirKibbles

[AfGHaNeSteIn]

aight, i haven't posted in a long time but anyways...

let's see...

WhiteBoy321:
more rhymes even though it was way shorter+
old skool attacks-
better rhythm+
no directness to SirKibbles in ure attacks- (should said something like u my b*tch now u be eatin my kibble's n bits, my rhymes tko, KO, with technical hits) or something like that, but that's just me

SirKibbles:
started very slow but got it better+
more dirrrrrrrect and better attacks+
where the rhymes at?--
where u did have rhymes, it was excellent though+
bad rhythm-
U NEVER LEAVE A FLOW WITHOUT A RHYME, U GOTTA FINISH WITH A STRONG RHYME!!!!-------

so overall i could really feel kibbles flow (he has improved alot) even though he had little rhythm

my vote: SirKibbles

[eloquence]

whiteboy321 and sirkibbles, are you guys still gunnu finish this?

[MasterMind]

This is an inconclusive battle, so there is no loser. But also, there is no winner.

I am sorry SirKribblez. Clearly though, you would have been the battle winner. Thus, I crown you winner of WhiteBoy321 Vs. SirKribblez unofficially.

Perhaps another battle?