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Post by MasterMind on Nov 27, 2003 0:00:17 GMT -5
It's the Thanksgiving bonanza! [Glow=Brown,2,300]Statix Vs. sirkrakalot [/glow] DJ!! DJ!!! SPIN THAT BEAT!!!!
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Post by SirKrakalot on Nov 27, 2003 17:54:39 GMT -5
me and Faraaz never really discussed a time to post but this is like the only chance i'm gonna have to be online so i'ma post now
Sittin there thinking you hot stuff;big killer/ your nuthin but a chump punk; little feller/ thought you had this win easy/ thought you had this battle fo' sheezy/
But you ain't never seen nuthin like this gun/ that i got in my mouth instead of a tongue/ so when I move my lips BANG BANG your gone/ got you dead and buried before next dawn/ So with this flow i'll drop the bomb/ send you home crying back to your mom/
You think you can rap you must be joking/ make swallow this flow so fast your choking/ So what if you were victorious before/ your rhymes are still lame to the core/ so weak they're gauranteed to bore/
You think you cool with a name like statix/ go back to 1st grade and learn your phonics/ after this battle you'll need the medics/ ship you home in a body bag via Fed-ex/
Think you so smart with all your honors classes/ but your brain still flows slow as molasses/ spit my rhymes at you till your delirious/ While I sit back and cry myself victorious/ Peace Eazyz from Da Kraker
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Post by Statix on Nov 27, 2003 17:59:44 GMT -5
All you white boys trying to be so hard When you realize how gay you’re acting You all discard that shit; you fall apart like a crystal shard You’re enacting blackness, but that is real distracting That subtracting type of behavior ought to be retracted
I have to say though Shane that you are pretty good at dancing But the advancing word on the street is you’re better at prancing Step over to the other side Shane, don’t worry about romancing You have no chance with those girls without the proper financing Even if you do get a girl, you’ll still fail without some penile enhancing
All you will get to do with a girl is looking Her clothes will still be on and you’ll still get a booking Im sorry, but it just will never get around to fooking It’s just not in your destiny, cuz that’s reserved for cooking MARTHA STEWART!!!! LALALALALA!!!!!!
I hope you’re capable of realizing, that I won foo Are you gonna sit down and start compromising Or, are you gonna get up and get a clue Please don’t sit there and start crying, I don’t mean to hurt you, but I’ll take the silver trophy from you!
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Post by Statix on Nov 27, 2003 18:01:50 GMT -5
gj shane...that was a tru battle of who could write a flow in 2 min... nice work
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Post by MasterMind on Nov 27, 2003 22:32:20 GMT -5
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Post by VallanKnight on Nov 27, 2003 23:57:06 GMT -5
Voter: Josh Pros (+) and Cons (-): sirkrakalot: -beat started a little squirrely. didn't start as strong as it might. +second stanza on were rock solid. Beat was consistent and attacks were excellent and frequent. -used 23 lines of your limit. Two more lines would have been even better, if you kept your beat goin'. +I like the gun analogy, although at first look it almost sounds like something else... +Nice definitive ending. Good job, Kracka ; p statix: -Beat started a little weird, like kraka's. +second stanza is just beautifully brutal. the attacks were excellent and flowed perfectly. props. +third stanza is good as well, but... -the last line of the third stanza just screws with your beat. why is it there? +Ending is excellent, and I like the hinting towards the Silver Mic, and the fact that you're saying that he's basically "not even second best" nice line. -20 lines? you had five more to your limit, that's enough for a whole nother stanza! work to the limit, man, it was close, one more thrust may have been able to tip the scale more to you. Final Score: Sirkrakalot. I gotta go with my Saltine homie on this one. Both of you did excellent. This was really an exemplary battle, however, kraka's flow just matched better, it was more consistent, and it had more lines.
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Post by grapesnobubble on Nov 28, 2003 0:06:18 GMT -5
rowe-
both did a good job..imma make this short cuz im lazy =P i agree wif josh...heh heh heh =)
vote: sirkrakalot
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G-Force 4
Pimp Protégé
AHHH! My Toe!
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Post by G-Force 4 on Nov 28, 2003 10:36:03 GMT -5
G here
Shane
+Consistant Beat -Rhymes are kinda common +Honors Classes segment good -Needed to go on the offensive more
Faraaz -Beat kinda weird +White boy attacks a little too generic
In the end my vote goes to
Shane
His flow was overall better and sounded more appealing
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dudette
Soldier
you're a loser.
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Post by dudette on Nov 28, 2003 22:46:14 GMT -5
shane: -nice job -you said "fo' sheezy"... HAHAHAHAH -i really like the whole gun/mouth/tongue metaphorical thing... good stuff -i would write more, but i'm just too lazy
faraaz: -good attacks -martha stewart... hehe... too bad it didn't rhyme -[insert above comment about being lazy]
good job to both of you, but the vote goes to shane
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Post by WizardNCastle on Nov 29, 2003 22:46:35 GMT -5
Shane +"dawn" "bomb" and "mom rhyme, but they don't look like the should +Good visuals (gun tounge) 0(Neutral doesn't count either way) the slashes (/) are annoying!
Faraaz -bad rhyme scheme +good story... if that's what you want to call it +Funny -low, bad insults ("gay" and "white")
Vote: Faraaz
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