VallanKnight Vs. SigmaKID

[MasterMind]

It's the flowing newbie battle of

[Glow=Blue,2,300]VallanKnight Vs. SigmaKID
[/glow]

Get rrready!!! DJ!! DJ!!! SPIN THAT BEAT!!!!

[SigmaKID]

beh i too was late, no excuse commence voting!
------------------------------------------------------------------

so you think you're a gangsta, VallanKnight
then pick up your sword and lets fight
after this flow ima blow you out of sight
with these words i'll rape you like your dad does at night

round 1- we engage with sheild and sword
slash - swing - clash your blood is poured
stab - strafe - bash your body is gored
my might compares to a multitude of hordes

round 2 - take out your arms
i'll blast you back to your home school farm
run to your mom before you're harmed
*bang* *bang* *headshot* your disarmed

round 3 - its time to end this battle
i already rode you hard, take off the saddle
i'm sure you'll go and tattle
compared to me your a baby with a rattle

you tried your best but you've failed
my sword stays sharp, you've been de-'male'd
only one remains that is hailed
i stand alone, as you are impaled

[VallanKnight]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
This post is a halfhour late! I completely spaced, it, I was almost asleep! But as I told Sigma... No Excuses. So let's go!

---------------------------------------

Woah, Siggy!
You think you can flow?
You better get ready
If you think you can row.
You better watch out
When I call the shots.
You'll be on your back
Seeing technicolor dots.
You may think I'm a runt,
That you can push me around,
But you got another thing comin'
And that thing is the ground.
Get up, Snorlax.
I ain't done with you yet.
You remember this fight
And dont ever forget.
The way you got beat;
My victory is due.
Better watch the Underdog:
He just took a bite outta you.

[xXSiNiStEr_MiXeRXx]

Anthony

Overall Comments: Good clean battle i enjoyed reading them =)

Comments:
Alex:
- Nice new approach
- Very nice rhymes
- The statement of the rounds made it a tad awkward but its still good
- Nice finish
-Good attacks

Josh:
- Good rhyme scheme
- Rhythm easy to follow
- Solid attacks
- Good finish

Vote: Sigma

Reason: The flow overall was i say more efficient and powerful. Good job both and props

[grapesnobubble]

hmm i think oppa had betta attacks n stuff but both were good

name on bottom n vote 4 my oppa Alex

[cRiTiCaLzEr0]

Brian Paz

SigmaKID

+ KICK ASS FLOW ;D
+ Creative ;D
+ De-male'd lol
+ Hella cool ;D
- Raped, come on now.

VallanKnight

- Started rhyming like Varun
+ Rhymed at least


Vote: Alex (SigmaKID)

[MasterMind]

Here's how to vote:

• Give us your name
  
  
• Comment on the performance
  
  
• Do not be biased
  
  
• State the reason for your vote and quote them if you want
  
  
• Put the name of the competitor you voted for

Vote now! Voting ends on the 13^th of November. If you do not follow the rules, your vote will be purged. (The competitors cannot vote)

Please, no spam.

[AfGHaNeSteIn]

kamran

they both were equally good,

sigma:
+more lines meant more things to say
-went out of rhythm alot
+liked the round 1-round 2 thing that was going on

vallanknight:
- too short
+easy rhythm to follow
+had some more nice attacks like snorlax and technicolor dots
+more of a real flow than sigmas whos sounded more like a poem

final vote:
vallanknight (even though i admit sigma deserved it)

[VallanKnight]

uhm... they were both 20 lines, exactley. What do you mean he had more to say?

[dudette]

alex:
-good structure, liked the "rounds"
-some awkward lines
-need more variety in attacks... they all sounded similar
-like the "de-'male'-d" thing

josh:
-too short (you do have the same number of lines, but your lines are much shorter)
-good rhythm
-flowed well
-good mix of offensive and defensive lines

vote: vallanknight... even though i'm still a little unsure lol... it was REALLY close