Hypnotic Vs. SK

[MasterMind]

[glow=green,2,300]Hypnotic Vs. SK[/glow]

DJ!! DJ!!!! SPIN THAT BEAT!!!!

[eloquence]

what a no show...

[Hypnotic]

Yeah yeah yeah, whatever! Arrangements are being made for the real battle date. Just keep watching folks, because sparks are going to fly.

[SK]

Of course it's gonna happen. Don't care if it's on the site or in real life, we're gonna do it. Sorry about my late responce for why I wasn't here. See, I've been sick over the past few days, and I mean real sick. Yeah, threw up a couple times, and had a fever so I think that's a pretty good excuse of why I couldn't do it. Though yeah, I'm feeling better, so I'm about to start posting raps on this site soon. Just to kind of build upon my skills a bit before the battle. Oh yeah, and comments really do help a person. Even if it's negative commentary. As long as it's towards the rap, and posted because they thought it might of helped if they did this when writting what they wrote. You know, all that good stuff. Well, talk about it more later. Gonna wait till I start seeing elo and J-Unit on the site again so that I know I can get feed back from at least three people (that's including you hypnotic, but i didn't list you before 'cause you just posted a bunch of stuff).

Well,
Buh-Bye

[MasterMind]

Finally! It is here!!!!

[glow=green,2,300]Hypnotic Vs. SK[/glow]

DJ!! DJ!!!! SPIN THAT BEAT!!!!

[Hypnotic]

I swoop down and swallow your lines like a bird
Shit 'em out and make you eat your own words
It's absord how I murder niggas
The infared on yo head and my fingas on the trigga
You wanna live through this, how could you figga?
It's not my time to die, my destiny gets much much bigga
You'd do betta teamin up with that bitch named Ncca

It's Check 1 2 and here's what we gonna do
Sneak in your house, slit yo throat and fuckin murder you
End yo life faster than if you had AIDs and caught the flu
Hypnotic on the mic, destroyin your hole damn crew
My ryhmes will have you so mezmorized you'll start to drool
The words I spit are much too cruel
Havin you feelin smaller than a water molecule

Hypnotic been more waited for than the 2nd comin of Christ
With these heaven sent skills, im killin you like mice
I'm rainin down on you for 40 days and 40 nights
I'm invinsible like King Author and his Knights
I'll put you through unbelieveable plight
So gather up every ounce of your might
But it still wont be enough to win this fight
Its not possible that you live through this storm
I've been ryhmin since the day I was born

I'm a fuckin veteran
and your just a rookie
betta yet a cookie fresh out my oven
Except I put malice and hate into you, instead of my lovin

You like to go by dead legend
It's time for your soul to to descend
Cause there aint no way are you goin to heaven
You wanted to be dead, so my words have brought your life to an end

[SK]

All right, I'm hyped up... gotta kick this shit off right. So Lets recap on this whole situation...

You said you'll kick me
Though you haven't seen your legs in days
Fat ass put the mic away, your not ready
I spit my rhymes like I hold my nine, straight steady
I don't need to win this battle
They already say my name and throw confetti

Callin me a rip-off ho? you bit off hova
Comin' at me with that shit, you better get sober
And get rid of that drunk skunk odder

Go get ready for my rhymes
'Cause they crush like bolder's
And attack in rows "like toy soldiers"
I hate to hurt ya, but I gotta get "this dirt off my shoulder"

Lettin' my lines collide and blow up like lyrical grenades
You can even call me the young renegade
So if your afraid, then get away, and stay away
Keep at bay, and I'll let you live for another day

Thought you would win this battle, but your only being diminished
Just like mastermind, your finished
They always said be careful with your wish
Since you didn't you got crossed off SK's killin' list
Now you see my words will do more than just slit your wrist

I'm bringing my A game at you full throttle
So this is the last time I'll pour out your bottle

'Cause this time I'm exposing to everyone that your no hero
SK - Won, Hypnotic - Zero

[MasterMind]

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[AfGHaNeSteIn]

The GrEaT OnE here...ruling supreme...

props to both of these gentlemen
that was some tight shit

very close, as usual with most battles (except mine and satan's a while back, which i blew him away)

so let's go down to it:

hypnotic:
best start of a rap i've read in a while..that was good shit
but then, ure momentum started slowing down with the might, plight, fight rhymes, it seemed as if u just needed to rhyme there, and it threw off the whole rhythm..of the 1st two stanzas on top which were crazyhot, finished good, but didn't finish stong

sk:
u started off with one leg, then caught momentum, and u finished strong as helll, with a good line too...u had more direct attacks to hypnotic, cuz his stuff was a little more general attack stuff...ure rhythm went off at some parts, and the dirt off my shoulder reference was more relevant than the king arthur stuff...

anyways...good job to both of yall...but

my vote goes to, SK.

[eloquence]

eloquence on the topic A.K.A. Daniel Drake A.K.A. Master of Moderation A.K.A. iceblue A.K.A. member of moderation legends A.K.A. member of POISON! A.K.A. ash A.K.A. D.E.D. A.K.A. Fear A.K.A. The pooper scooper A.K.A. member of Check 1 2 A.K.A. Kouben

Hypnotic: The intro was tight. Second paragraph was ill. I do agree with, "afrganestain" on the parts where it seems like your rhyming with counterfit words from a kids book and i strongly disagree with the christ thing!!
That kinda ruined the flow, but the last rhymes made it pretty cool. Overall it just didn't sound that fresh. But i give you alot of respect for it. Great intro!! I was really feelin it!!

SK: It sucked!!!!





















Just kidding!!! It was tight. The beggining started off shaky, but when you started sampling off of eminem and jay-z, it was pretty dope. From there it got tight, loved the " lyrical grenades ". You pulled the pin on the last two lines when you said, "'Cause this time I'm exposing to everyone that your no hero
SK - Won, Hypnotic - Zero "
That was extremely tight. Best ending ive seen on bgl.

My True Vote-






























SK