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Oct 21, 2003 21:22:18 GMT -5
Post by soysaucey on Oct 21, 2003 21:22:18 GMT -5
YAY! I was gonna ask for a board like this. =D glad someone got to it before me! =D Are we allowed to post old poems we have written to see what people think?
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Oct 21, 2003 22:10:36 GMT -5
Post by MasterMind on Oct 21, 2003 22:10:36 GMT -5
Please post any poetry that you would like to share with us.
I've never quite understood poetry, perhaps some of you can teach me.
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Oct 21, 2003 22:50:39 GMT -5
Post by soysaucey on Oct 21, 2003 22:50:39 GMT -5
Looking out my window/ I see the tears of the sky./ I know that there is more to life,/ But I let time fly./ I miss the feeling of your hand in mine./ I wasn't supposed to admit it,/ But I miss you so much I can't stand it./ You let some shit get between us./ I lost your friendship, you lost my trust./ Don't leave me in this cold dark place./ When I close my eyes, I can see your face./ Stop playing with my emotions/ Stop messing with my head./ I don't need this, I wish I was dead./ Don't pretend to care./ Don't pretend that you'll be there./ I was a fool to believe/ That you'd be there for me./ Nothing else matters to you./ Even in our friendship, you couldn't stay true./ I can't stand the way you look at me,/ Full of nothingness./ I can feel it building up inside of me.../ The pain./ The hate./ The sorrow./ Its fate/ Working its magic/ In unfair ways./ You ignore me/ Like I'm not even there./ You don't talk to me/ And I can tell you don't care./ Lies, deciet,/ Shame, defeat./ I know things wont go back to how they used to be. hMm.. It's not very good.. =P
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Oct 21, 2003 22:54:05 GMT -5
Post by Post Number on Oct 21, 2003 22:54:05 GMT -5
cussing is bad in poetry, it takes on the real meaning of the word...
and i dont think some actual feces came between the subjects
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Oct 21, 2003 22:55:20 GMT -5
Post by xXSiNiStEr_MiXeRXx on Oct 21, 2003 22:55:20 GMT -5
=) if you try its good if you dont then its not as good =P and since you posted its good!!! =D but its good even without my nonsensical philosophy... ok ill shut up now
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Oct 21, 2003 22:58:58 GMT -5
Post by soysaucey on Oct 21, 2003 22:58:58 GMT -5
lol, thanks. has anyone noticed the font got bigger on the site?? what happened?? lol is it just me?
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Oct 21, 2003 23:17:17 GMT -5
Post by sLiCkViC on Oct 21, 2003 23:17:17 GMT -5
yo people here goes sumthin im writing rite now
why does it hurt so bad/ this pain, inside, it makes me sad/ its been awhile since i felt happy/ everythin around me jus seems so sappy/ people, teachers, and damn homework/ they make me go psycho and feel berzerk/ feels like sumthin is crawlin inside/ its eatin at my poor pathetic mind/ when will it stop no one knows/ maybe its sumthin i must outgrow/ maybe i can, wid this flow/ or maybe it wont do nuthin, it mite jus blow/ i must stop this pain and decide my fate/ or ill be gone, forever, at this alarming rate.
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Oct 21, 2003 23:29:24 GMT -5
Post by soysaucey on Oct 21, 2003 23:29:24 GMT -5
wow.. that was good =]
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Oct 21, 2003 23:45:34 GMT -5
Post by sLiCkViC on Oct 21, 2003 23:45:34 GMT -5
life today is so full of dismay/ the problems, the pain, they wont go away/ school is a dick/ it hits hard as a brick/ grades fall/ people bawl/ we need to free ourselves of this oppression/ or else we will go into deeper depression/ life shouldnt be the way it is/ it should be better than this/ more happy and full of grace/ greed and envy is sumthin we shall not embrace/ free yourselves i think you'll like it/ there is no reason that you should fight it/ release urself, you'll be jus fine/ its so good, it will blow your mind/ come on people let your freedom ring/ open your wings and begin to sing/ im independant, unstoppable/ this society, it will become inoperable....
yea kinda stupid but yea u noe tryin not to sound so commie as sum of u ppl noe me ass.
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Oct 22, 2003 1:57:46 GMT -5
Post by xXSiNiStEr_MiXeRXx on Oct 22, 2003 1:57:46 GMT -5
take a breath, breathe in even if i want to shout ease my mind kill the stress there is no one here to doubt all the pressure and the work that makes my head feel strained all the problems and what they're worth makes me feel like i've been drained everyday just feels the same all boring monotony i just have to take these problems and make them a part of me there are times when i feel that i am just too stressed there are times when i feel that i am too depressed i just have to sit and think as the day becomes the night is it really worth it all? is life really worth the fight?
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